Monday, April 29, 2013

(Bonus Article) IRON MAN: A Hybrid Mantle



As I was planning my previous two articles on the Taking on the Mantle story type, I originally wanted to use the 2008 blockbuster Iron Man as one of my examples for the Crisis of Character subtype. However, when the time came to break my study films down and find their hidden connections, Iron Man gave me a lot of trouble. On the outside, it seemed to fit into the Crisis of Character mold along with the other films of that subtype such as Rushmore and As Good as it Gets. You have the deeply-flawed Tony Stark with his antisocial behavior. Stark begins the story thriving in a pleasant, selfish niche, a niche that is soon torn up by the roots when he is kidnapped by militants. Iron Man also contains the trinity of essential Crisis of Character players; the Flawed Protagonist (Stark), the Character of Attraction (Pepper Potts), and the Character of Disapproval (Lt. Col. Rhodes).

However, outside of this, Iron Man refused to conform to the pattern so clear in my other study films. It had an outside antagonist, Obadiah Stane (Jeff Bridges). The story’s sequences did not seem to occur at the appropriate times. Tony Stark feels the urge to change as a person far too soon. And the Characters of Attraction and Disapproval did not have nearly as much influence upon the plot as they are expected in a Crisis of Character. I know “gurus” are usually good at shoehorning existing films into their vague models, but if I tried this, it would all be BS.

At first, I was going to blow it off by saying “Well, it’s a comic book movie. That genre just needs this type of stuff.” Then, looking closer into Iron Man’s plot, I realized something. I had seem its pattern before. Actually, I am embarrassed that I did not recognize it right away. While the film’s setup and character relationships followed the conceits of the Crisis of Character subtype, its plot followed the second subtype, the Crisis of Conscience. Iron Man is a hybrid of both Taking on the Mantle subtypes.

Though Stark has a deeply-flawed personality that prevents meaningful human relationships by pushing people away (Crisis of Character), he is also a character of latent morality that begins his story willfully aligned with a morally ambiguous industry (weapons manufacture) headed by a Force of Darkness character (Obadiah Stane). This second description is the hallmark of a Crisis of Conscience story, as seen in films such as On the Waterfront and Casablanca.

While no one can deny that Iron Man’s story “works” on an audience level, the fact that the film’s story type is six of one and a half-dozen of the other accounts for all the little rocky structural moments I have always felt while watching the film. The film must always compromise one of its formulas for the sake of the other.

Take another look at my previous article on the Crisis of Conscience subtype to observe its form.

While Iron Man’s first act conforms to the structure of a Crisis of Character, starting with its Protagonist in a comfortable niche which is then pulled up by its roots by outside events, it also, to a weaker degree, follows the requirements of a Crisis of Conscience first act. Stark is first sent by the Force of Darkness character on a minor mission (to sell the Jericho missile to the US military). This minor mission is necessary to establish the Protagonist’s loyalty to the unethical business he aligns himself with. In true Crisis of Conscience form, the Protagonist is then given a bigger, far more important mission by the Force of Darkness (however, via proxy through the sub-antagonist) – to build a Jericho missile for the militant group The Five Rings. (This sequence provides the film with the first bump in its structural road. Since we do know until much later that the Five Rings are in league with Obadiah, this sequence feels disconnected from rest of the film to follow and leaves the audience confused over who is the real villain of this film.)

From this point on, the plot of Iron Man sticks almost exclusively to the Crisis of Conscience form.

Because of the “mission” Stark was given at his inciting incident, he begins his second act in a state of moral dilemma. Should he play it safe and continue towing the company line (continue creating weapons that bring death and destruction), or should he follow a newfound moral urge to break away and do what is right? Unfortunately, Iron Man lacks a key component of the Crisis of Conscience formula that helps establish and develop this dilemma. There is no Outside Relationship Character. The Outside Relationship Character is the Crisis of Conscience’s most essential supporting character. He or she is a force of goodness who asks the Protagonist for help, thus becoming the magnet that slowly draws the Protagonist away from the Force of Darkness and onto a righteous path. Iron Man briefly features a character who seems to fill this role, Dr. Yinsin (the man trapped with Stark in the militant’s cave). However, Yinsin dies at the end of the first act. For the rest of the film, instead of a physical character urging the Protagonist towards goodness and justice, Stark is left with simply an abstract feeling that he should “do what is right.” Though admirable, this ambiguous impulse leaves Stark’s motivations a bit hazy for the rest of the film.

In trues Crisis of Conscience form, Stark’s moral dilemma grows throughout Act 2A. The Force of Darkness notices this change of behavior and warns the Protagonist against it. Just like in On the Waterfront, Casablanca, and Michael Clayton, the Protagonist stays more or less on the fence until the Force of Darkness commits an act so morally reprehensible that the Protagonist can no longer turn a blind eye. Obadiah openly admits to supplying the massacres committed by the Five Rings as well as who knows what other kinds of evildoers.

At the Midpoint, Stark takes his first decisive action against the Force of Darkness by suiting up as Iron Man and defeating the Five Rings. Then, just like Johnny Friendly in Waterfront or Karen Crowder in Michael Clayton, Obadiah comes to realizes that Stark is now a legitimate threat and must be quickly eliminated.

The Force of Evil tries to destroy the Protagonist at the end of Act 2B. The Protagonist survives. The Protagonist launches himself into Act 3 knowing there is only one right thing to do: fully abandon his old ways and absolutely destroy the Force of Darkness. This is a textbook Crisis of Conscience ending. However, the storytellers managed to still execute its action in a way that still manages to come full circle and also fulfill the third act needs of the Crisis of Character: a big selfless action that proves the Protagonist has changed as a person, finally winning over the hearts of both Character of Attraction and the Character of Disapproval.

This hybridization has both advantages and drawbacks. On the upside, it allows the kind of intense action the comic book genre requires. While Crisis of Character stories focuses mostly upon an internal conflict and personal character growth (in other words, stuff that is not very visually thrilling), the Crisis Conscience is all about taking decisive physical action for what is good and right. On the downside, this form downgrades two characters very important to Stark’s transformation, Pepper Potts and Col. Rhodes, into mere supporting characters. Their relationships with Stark become minor subplots backing up the big action, rather than the causes for the plot itself.

This hybridization can also be seen to a smaller degree in a film discussed in my previous article: Liar, Liar. Fletcher Reede (Jim Carrey) begins the story aligned with a morally ambiguous law film, working underneath a Force of Darkness-like boss. Fletcher is ordered to win a case, one in which Fletcher knows he is standing on the wrong of right or wrong. This creates a moral dilemma in Fletcher, eventually leading him to reject the firm. However, once again hybridization has its drawbacks. Liar, Liar’s plot is basically split in two. Throughout the film, the audience remains confused over what the story is really all about: The court case? Or Fletcher’s relationship with his son?

Sunday, April 28, 2013

The "Taking on the Mantle" Story Type, Part II: The Crisis of Character


Related articles: The 20 Common Patterns of Plot Progression; The "Taking on the Mantle" Story Type, Part I: The Crisis of Conscience



 
This month’s article took much longer to put together than I expected.

Last month, we broke down the second subtype of the Taking on the Mantle story type, the Crisis of Conscience. (See the article on the 20 Common Patterns of Plot if you have not already. Otherwise, this article will be pretty difficult to understand.) This month, we double back and analyze the first subtype, the Crisis of Character. Despite how common the Crisis of Character subtype first appeared to be when I began my research, its patterns proved quite difficult to spot and nail down. I found that a true Crisis of Character story pattern was not as common as I believed. A number of films I thought to be a Crisis of Character actually belong to its sister type, the Crisis of Conscience (Schindler’s List, Thank-you for Smoking). Some films appeared to fit the subtype upon first glance, but closer analysis revealed details that proved they do not to belong to the Taking on the Mantle category at all (For instance, two John Hughes comedies, Uncle Buck and Home Alone.) However, despite the difficulties, I am proud to say I have cracked the code, and rather than horde this hard-won knowledge, I am going to share it with all of you.

Our study films for this article:
Rushmore
Shrek
As Good as it Gets
Liar, Liar

First, let’s review. A film with the Taking on the Mantle story type contains a plot in which:
The protagonist starts as an antihero – someone who is capable of being a hero, yet is unwilling due to selfishness or some other personal flaw. Events invade the protagonist's life to force him or her to take on the role of a hero. Though the protagonist may face a large threat from a force of antagonism, the protagonist's biggest obstacle is his or her own resistance to personal change. Development occurs when story events force the protagonist to change his or her behavior bit by bit from self-centered to heroic in order to reach the main story goal.

The Taking on the Mantle story type can be divided into two distinct sub-types: The Crisis of Character, and the Crisis of Conscience.

As covered last month, in a Crisis of Conscience (Casablanca, On the Waterfront, Michael Clayton), the Protagonist is a person of latent morality who begins the story aligned with an immoral or ethically dubious Force of Darkness. Events invade the Protagonist’s life that cause him or her to question his or her loyalty to this Force. The Protagonist eventually turns on the Force of Darkness, and defeats it.

The Crisis of Character subtype is quite different. Its Protagonist is a person who begins the story with a deeply-flawed personality. This flaw causes him or her to behave in an antisocial or socially irresponsible manner. Events invade the Protagonist’s life that cause him or her to realize the damage this behavior causes him/herself, and more importantly, others. Eventually, the Protagonist must decide to change the very nature of his or her being for the sake of forging stronger, healthier connections with his or her fellow human beings.

THE MAJOR PLAYERS


The Crisis of Character subtype revolves around the relationships between three essential characters: a Flawed Protagonist, a Character of Attraction, and a Character of Disapproval.

The Flawed Protagonist

Though the Protagonist may be a person of various attractive traits, his behavior is dominated by a major personality flaw. In fact, this flaw has become so pervasive it has come to be the essence of his being. (Since all four protagonists of our study films are male, I will refer to the Protagonist as “he” for the rest of the article for the sake of simpler grammar.) This flaw has built a wall around the Protagonist, socially isolating him from all meaningful contact with other human beings. Though this wall may serve to protect the Protagonist from the outside world and preserve his self-image, it prevents the fulfillment of any emotional needs. Though there may be characters who wish to get closer to the Protagonist, they choose not to, since dealing with the Protagonist’s flawed, self-indulgent personality gives them far more grief than they wish to put up with.

In our study films: Max Fisher (Jason Schwartzman) of Rushmore is about as impressive a young man as you might find. However, he is narcissistic and a borderline-sociopath, making him psychologically incapable of forming any true friendships. Shrek is an antisocial grump who would rather live in total isolation than put up with the difficulties that come from dealing with other persons. Melvin Udall (Jack Nicholson) of As Good as it Gets is an extremely talented author, but he is also a total misanthrope. He protects his obsessive-compulsive lifestyle by gleefully pushing every person away with rude and offensive behavior. Fletcher Reede (Jim Carrey) in Liar, Liar has had great success in his law career, but only because he has zero compulsion against manipulating everyone he meets with dishonesty.

The Character of Attraction

The Character of Attraction is a person with whom the Protagonist, for one reason or another, desires to have a closer, more intimate relationship. This is Miss Cross (Olivia Williams) in Rushmore, Princess Fiona in Shrek, Carol the waitress (Helen Hunt) in As Good as it Gets, and Fletcher’s son Max (that freakin’ kid) in Liar, Liar. Though this character may share the Protagonist’s feelings of attraction to one degree or another, he or she is hip to the Protagonist’s bullshit. The Character of Attraction
does not wish to get closer to the Protagonist because he or she knows the Protagonist’s flaw makes him too difficult or unpleasant to deal with. Even Fletcher’s son Max, though he may love his father with all his heart, is reluctant to trust Fletcher because he knows his father will constantly let him down. A majority of the story’s focus follows the Protagonist’s attempts to “win over” the Character of Attraction. Thus, this character’s story function is to provide the Protagonist with a tangible motivation to change as a person.

The Character of Disapproval

The Protagonist’s second essential relationship comes from a character loosely linked to the Protagonist through family (Fletcher’s ex-wife Audrey (Maura Tierney) in Liar), duty (see upcoming bonus article on Iron Man), proximity (Simon (Greg Kinnear) in As Good), or a tenuous friendship (Donkey in Shrek and Mr. Blume (Bill Murray) in Rushmore). Though the Character of Disapproval may admire the Protagonist for his
positive traits (if he has any) and hope for a healthy relationship between the two of them, this character openly disapproves of the Protagonist’s flawed behavior and is not afraid to say so. However, unlike the Character of Attraction, the Protagonist does not really give half a damn what the Character of Disapproval thinks. The Character of Disapproval is someone the Protagonist could really take or leave. Throughout the story, the relationship between these characters wavers from friendly to openly antagonistic. The function of the Character of Disapproval is to provide the Protagonist with the constant criticism necessary to slowly him towards change.

The Antagonist, or Lack Thereof

Though Crisis of Character stories may contain characters who are openly antagonistic or threaten the Protagonist (such as Lord Farquaad in Shrek, or Fletcher’s boss Miranda in Liar), these characters are not the stories’ real antagonists. In a true Crisis of Character, protagonist and antagonist are one and the same person. Rather than being undermined by an outside force, the Protagonist is his own worst enemy. The Protagonist’s personality seems to have two sides: a side that enjoys being flawed and antisocial, and wishes to remain that way; and a side that wishes to abandon the flaw and reach out to other persons. This splits the Protagonist like a Dr. Jeckyll & Mr. Hyde. Every time the Protagonist’s good side tries to make progress, the bad side pops up to sabotage everything. For instance, whenever Melvin Udall manages to make any progress with Carol, he is then stupid enough to give into his old ways and say something offensive. Whenever Shrek gets closer to another person, he feels the compulsion to once again push them away. Just as most films feature a Protagonist and Antagonist who openly wish to destroy one another, so does a Crisis of Character – only this battle takes place completely within the main character’s self.


THE COURSE OF THE PLOT


Shrek is supposed to be a fairy tale. And as most fairy tales are good at, it provides a simple allegory to understand much more complicated stories of its same type. Shrek is an ogre. So are Max Fisher, Melvin Udall, and Fletcher Reede (figuratively, of course). Ogres are crude, disagreeable beasts who have no place in polite society. However, Shrek enjoys being an ogre. His disagreeable nature has given him a comfortable, albeit isolated, life. Unfortunately, this self-insulated life is invaded by an event that turns everything upside down. In order to get life back to how he knew it, Shrek is forced to journey outside his life of habit, interact with other persons, and perform tasks for others that he would never do under normal circumstances. 


Only then, something changes in Shrek. In performing these tasks, Shrek comes to realize there is something that feels good about interacting with people, even better than the insulating comfort he felt in isolation. Only this new impulse runs counter to Shrek’s orgeous nature, prompting an internal conflict. Shrek succumbs to his old ways, but only misery comes with it. In the end, Shrek abandons his former ogreous nature for a new one that is willing to embrace others with open arms. By achieving true relationships with others, Shrek finds happiness.

The Setup: A Comfortable Niche
The Protagonist begins the story living within a comfortable self-created little world. The Protagonist is happy in this world. In fact, he thrives in it – not despite of his flaw, but because of the flaw. Max Fisher’s narcissism has made a private little universe out of Rushmore Academy, a universe where he is king. Melvin Udall’s rejection of humanity has allowed him to insulate himself in a private world where he can embrace his obsessive-compulsive disorder rather than deal with its effects on others. Fletcher Reede’s compulsion to lie has given him a successful law career. In fact, he is one big case away from becoming a partner. Because this niche is so comfortable, the Protagonist believes his flaw to be a good thing. He sees no need to change, no matter what others may tell him. Only one thing is missing: genuine relationships with other people.

The Inciting Incident to the End of the 1st Act: Uprooting the Niche
As with any inciting incident, the Protagonist’s life is invaded by an event that disrupts the status quo. But unlike most inciting incidents, the Protagonist is not simply confronted by a threat or a challenge, but by something or a combination of things that completely tear up his comfortable niche by the roots. Max Fisher is expelled from Rushmore Academy. Shrek’s swamp is invaded when it is turned into a ghetto for banished fairy tale creatures. This uprooting may happen all at once at the inciting incident, or it may happen through a combination of events: one at the inciting incident and another at the end of the first act, with a number of minor disruptions in between. Fletcher Reede’s niche is first disrupted when Max’s birthday wish makes him unable to do his job as he always has. The disruption of Fletcher’s status quo is made total when Audrey tells Fletcher she is moving away and taking Max with her. Melvin’s uprooting begins small when he is forced to take care of Simon’s dog – that is, care for another living creature and have regular contact with the gay neighbor the homophobic Melvin wants nothing to do with. This is already a lot to handle for someone as OCD-ridden as Melvin. But Melvin’s precious life of habit is further torn apart when Carol, the only person in the world whose company Melvin enjoys, is no longer available to wait on him on his daily visit to the cafe. Melvin feels as if his universe is crashing down around him. By the end of the first act, the Protagonist feels lost, confused, and angry as everything he seemed to enjoy in the past has been destroyed.

Act 2A
The Protagonist desperately wants his comfortable niche back again. But to do this, the Protagonist must do the unthinkable: reach out to other human beings. The Protagonist asks the Character of Attraction and/or the Character of Disapproval for assistance. Melvin visits to Carol’s home to demand that she come back to work. Fletcher begs Audrey to change her mind. Max Fisher recruits Mr. Blume to help him speak to Miss Cross. Unfortunately, these other characters do not trust the Protagonist. After all, the Protagonist’s motives remain selfish, and the wall created by the Protagonist’s flaw remains as strong as ever. This failed interaction causes the Protagonist to, possibly for the first time, realize the effects his flawed behavior has on other people. Words alone are not going to reverse the Protagonist’s situation. He needs to take action.

So, the Protagonist takes an action or begins a course of actions in relation to the Character of Attraction he would never have even considered previously in an attempt to restore the status quo. As a side effect, this action forges a stronger bond between the characters. Melvin pays for a private doctor to take care of Carol’s son so Carol will not have to miss work. Max Fisher tries to make an honest go at his new public school with the help of Mr. Blume and Miss Cross as his tutor. Fletcher reaches out to his son in the hopes that his son will reverse his birthday wish. Though some of these actions, such as Melvin’s, may seem altruistic on their surface, they remain selfishly-motivated. All Melvin cares about is getting Carol to wait on him at the restaurant again.

Unfortunately, though these actions may yield a short-term benefit, things do not turn out exactly as the Protagonist expects. This is because the Protagonist’s flaw has kept him from understanding or predicting how the other characters may react. Carol wants to reject Melvin’s gift because she believes Melvin wants something sexual out of the deal. Fletcher fails at his attempt to reverse his son’s wish because Max does not want his father to lie again. Max Fisher finds that, instead of drawing Miss Cross closer to him, he has actually driven her into the arms of Mr. Blume.

The Protagonist feels rejected. To his surprise, his stone heart breaks. Through the pain of this emotion, the Protagonist realizes there may be something better in life than his selfish little niche. The Character of Attraction’s rejection causes the Protagonist to realize just how important the Character of Attraction is to him. The Protagonist then changes gears. He realizes that his only course to happiness will come by winning over the Character of Attraction and creating a permanent and satisfying relationship between to two of them.

The Protagonist then launches a new mission to do just that. However, this mission is still ill-conceived, since the Protagonist still relies on his flawed behavior to get him through it. Melvin agrees to take Simon on a road trip in the hopes that Carol will join them so he can grow closer to her. Only Melvin does himself no favors by how he talks to Simon and Carol on the trip. In Liar, Audrey gives Fletcher an ultimatum he must meet to so he will not lose Max. But to achieve this ultimatum, Fletcher must first get through his court case on time, something he struggles with to do due to his continued impulse to manipulate the situation through dishonesty. Max Fisher’s mission is the most ill-conceived of all. Max plans to “win Miss Cross back” through a narcissistic urge to destroy anything that stands in the way of what he sees as their love. This of course only pushes Miss Cross further away.

Sooner or later, the Protagonist realizes that the only way to succeed at this mission is by fighting against his flaw, and embracing its opposite. The only way happiness will come is by trying to become a better person. These new efforts have success. Fletcher wins his court case through honest means. Max Fisher and Melvin both find their way to a first kiss with Miss Cross and Carol.

Only this success is short-lived. Immediately after the victory, the Protagonist sabotages himself with an action that seems to ruin any future chance of the Protagonist and Character of Attraction sealing their relationship. Melvin says something so stupid and offensive that Carol never wants to see him again. Miss Cross discovers the duplicity that set up her intimate moment with Max and throws him out of her house. Fletcher is put in jail for contempt of court, making him unable to stop Audrey from taking Max away. It seems the Protagonist has failed.

Act 3
With the Character of Attraction seemingly out of the picture, the Protagonist has no one else to turn to but the Character of Disapproval. The two reconcile their differences and become honest friends. The Character of Disapproval then encourages the Protagonist to do whatever it takes, no matter how crazy, to win the Character of Attraction back. (Note that in Liar, Liar it is illogical from a story perspective that Fletcher reconcile with the Character of Disapproval at this point. Since Audrey is the one taking Max away to Boston, if they reconcile here, there would be no more third act. To get around this, the film achieves this plot point by way of a proxy character: Fletcher’s secretary Greta, a lesser supporting character who performs many story functions similar to the Character of Disapproval.)

The Protagonist takes one giant final action to prove to the Character of Attraction, and the world in general, how much he or she really means to him. This action must show the lengths the Protagonist is willing to go in order to be worthy of the Character of Attraction’s love. Melvin appears on Carol’s doorstep in the middle of the night to confess his love. Fletcher stops Max and Audrey’s plane from taking off just so he can see Max again. Shrek disrupts Princess Fiona’s wedding to Lord Farquaad. Max stages a big event that atones for not only his wrongs to Miss Cross, but everyone who has been the victim of his narcissism in the past.

By proving himself in such a dramatic fashion, the Protagonist fully and finally abandons the protective wall he has built around himself through his flaw. He is now willing to be vulnerable and emotionally available to the people around him. With such a show, the Character of Attraction has no choice but to give – maybe not in the way the Protagonist originally wanted – but one that suggests the Protagonist has achieved happiness and satisfaction, and will continue to do so in the future. This was only possible through a full and total change in character. The Protagonist has abandoned the clothing of a flawed ogre and taken on the mantle of a hero.


Tuesday, April 16, 2013

The HISTORY of scribbler, PART ONE (Fifth Anniversay Link-stravaganza!)


The end of this month will mark five full years since I began scribbler (originally titled “Uncelebrity” until circumstances inspired a change in format). Since that time, I have chronicled over seventy long-form articles detailing my personal exploration of the dark and hidden corners of screencraft. What began as a loose pile of gripes formed as a lowly script reader grew into a revolutionary new method of approach to the cinematic narrative, ultimately leading to the publication of my first comprehensive guide on the subject Screenwriting Down to the Atoms. Today, scribbler remains the only* screenwriting blog on the web dedicated to “Progressive Theory,” with articles that push at the limits of how the craft is taught and understood by challenging old ideas, developing new models, and unearthing discoveries never previously considered.
(*the only one that I know of. And trust me, I have looked. If anyone knows of another, please send me the link. I would love to read it.)

However, one of the difficulties that comes from teaching anything with a blog, is that they are by nature a very random method of communication. Like most blogs, scribbler’s monthly articles have little rhyme of reason to their choice of topic other than it was what happened to be on my mind at the time. Some topics are crucial to understanding the craft, while others are more trivial. Some are very well-written, while others are a bit rushed. Some articles are difficult to get anything out of unless you first read everything that has come before it on the subject; articles which are usually buried deep in the blog’s archives. So unless one is willing to go all the way back to the first article and read them all in the order they were posted, it is hard to get the most out of the thing.

So, in recognition of my five-year anniversary I have chosen a selection of what I consider my most useful articles, grouped by subject below. I admit I am a little embarrassed by the number of typos and redundancies in some of my early stuff. I was never an English Major and scribbler has never been the most professionally-edited blog on the planet. Luckily, I have gotten better with time. (When I wrote Screenwriting Down to the Atoms, I edited the original manuscript six times to keep it from being blog-sloppy.) Also, some the ideas proposed in my early articles turned out to be a bit primitive. Most of the original concepts have been further developed and expanded upon.

Enough self-abasement. Enjoy the articles listed below. Scribble on!

Story Structure

Story Development

Character
F@#%THE CAT! (Aug 2010)

Conflict

Writing the Scene

The “Atoms of Information” Theory

Story Types

Theme

Dialogue & Description
I H8 VAGUE (Mar 2011)

Rewriting

Writing Comedy

Stop Sucking!

Saturday, March 16, 2013

FREE Script Notes from SCRIPTMONK! (that's right. free. read on for details)


As some of you already know (or can easily tell from the colorful banners adorning the sides of this blog) in late January I published my first book Screenwriting Down to the Atoms. Since then it has been my mission to help developing writers by getting my book and its unique new method under as many noses as possible. For those of you who have supported my efforts thus far, I thank you. Things are going pretty well. Thursday the Kindle version cracked the Top 10 in screenwriting books on Amazon for the first time. (Then it fell down to #24, then back up to #6 today. The Amazon’s rankings algorithm seems to be a mystery to everyone in the world. Things go up and down more often than the stock market.) But for those of you who are still on the fence about my method, I have decided to give things a little nudge with an offer that, considering how much of my personal time and effort will be involved, is pretty insane.

For the zillions of you currently out there working on a screenplay, I am going to give FREE script notes and coverage to the first ten people to order a paperback copy of Screenwriting Down to the Atoms on Amazon between March 15 through March 31, and send me proof of purchase. This is a service for which I usually charge $50-75, but you can get it at the paperback purchase price of only $12.99.

You can look at this offer in a lot of different ways. You might think of it as buying an incredibly helpful book and getting $75 worth of script notes as a bonus. Or, you might consider it as getting professional coverage for only $12.99, plus a free book to sweeten the deal. Or you might look at it as getting both for one ridiculously low price. Whichever way you look at it, one thing is certain: I am going to be very busy reading scripts for the rest of the month.

Here is how to do it:

1. Order a copy of Screenwriting Down to the Atoms from Amazon.com. (Please note that this offer is currently for paperback copies only, ordered between March 15 and March 31. Though I would love to reward everyone who supports me in any way, my time and resources force me to put limits on this promotion.)

2. Email me at services@scriptmonkindustries.com with the words “Promo offer” in the subject line. As proof of purchase, please attach a screenshot of your Amazon.com receipt. (There are instructions on how to create a screenshot below.)

3. I will return your email with a short questionnaire asking for some helpful information on you and the script you would like to submit. (This is something I send to all people who request script notes.) Please answer the questionnaire in a return email with your screenplay attached as a .pdf document.

That’s it. I will read the scripts in the order they are I received. Barring some sort of unforeseen disaster, I intend to finish the tenth and final script by mid-April.



How to take a screenshot as proof of purchase:

For PC users:
Find and open the confirmation email Amazon sends you after making your order. Make sure the important information is centered in the email window and press the “Print Screen” button on your keyboard. The Print Screen button is one of those rarely-used keys on the top of the keyboard next to all the F10, F11, F12 buttons. It may be abbreviated as “PrtSc” or “PrntScr” or something like that.
Next, open the Microsoft Paint program. Paint is a program that comes factory-installed on every PC. Find it under Start > Accessories > Paint. When the program loads, press Ctrl + V on your keyboard, or go to the menus and select Edit > Paste. This pastes the screenshot you took of your Amazon email into body of the program. Press Ctrl + S to save it. This turns the screenshot into a picture file which you can attach to your email.

For Mac users:
For Mac, the process is much simpler. Open and center the Amazon email. Hold down the Command key (that’s the one with the Apple logo on it), plus the Shift key, and then press the number 3. This automatically saves a screenshot onto your desktop as a PNG picture file.

Important Note: I am not trying to scam you for your personal information. I do not WANT your personal information. In fact, it is best for me if I do not see it at all. So, while you have your screenshot open in Microsoft Paint (or if you use Mac, open the screenshot file in an image editor program), take the paintbrush tool and black out any information you would not like a stranger to see. This includes your mailing address, any payment information, any other items you purchased, or even your last name if you are not comfortable giving it. All I really need to see is that you ordered the book, the amount you paid for it, and when it was ordered.



Please remember that I can only do this for the first ten people to send me their proof of purchase. I hate to turn people down, so if you are interested, I suggest you act fast. 

Scribble on.

Friday, March 15, 2013

The "Taking on the Mantle" Story Type -- Part I: Crisis of Conscience



Two years ago I wrote an article identifying the 20 Common Patterns of Plot, or “Story Types” found in feature films. Recently, I have expanded on these types with articles analyzing specific films, including the use of the Reconciled Rivals type in two of Sergio Leone’s most popular films, and the Healing Narrative as found in Alexander Payne’s Sideways. This month’s article, and the one to follow, looks at one of the most commonly-used story types, the “Taking on the Mantle.”

Along with “An Innocent Abroad” and “A Small Man/Woman Rises,” the Taking on the Mantle story type is found more often in mainstream cinema than any other, appearing in films in every style or genre, ranging from Schinder’s List to Iron Man. To introduce it briefly, a Taking on the Mantle story begins with a protagonist who is capable of being a hero, yet is unwilling to take on that role due to a collection of selfish or self-destructive traits. For years, the protagonist has used these traits to voluntarily close him or herself off from the physical and emotional needs of other human beings, resulting in a lonely, self-protected little world. The protagonist’s life is then invaded by a problem that forces him or her to step outside of this selfish world and realize the damage his/her negative traits cause him/herself and others. This creates and ethical dilemma. The protagonist can either turn a blind eye to those in need and fall back into his or her old ways, or the protagonist can abandon these traits and become a hero. A “mantle” is the long, flowing cape usually associated with superheroes. So, in this story type, the protagonist must choose to either put on the clothes of a hero, or remain in those of a heel.

Looking closer, the Taking on the Mantle story type can be further divided into two distinct subtypes:
a. Crisis of Character
b. Crisis of Conscience

In Crisis of Character, the protagonist begins the story with a warped, ego-centric consideration of right and wrong. The protagonist acts as if he or she is the center of the universe, and is unwilling to show any regard for the persons around them unless they can benefit from the situation.

In Crisis of Conscience, the protagonist does begin the story with an honest sense of right and wrong. However, the protagonist chooses to ignore it. Instead, the character willingly turns a blind eye towards evil or injustice, even becoming complicit in its execution, based upon justifications the character creates to convince him or herself that it is best to stay quiet and play along with this evil.

Crisis of Character and Crisis of Conscience take different paths to transform their protagonists. Though seen less often, we will investigate the Crisis of Conscience first. (Why? Frankly, I am currently working on a story in this subtype, so at the moment I have put much more work into it.)

The Crisis of Conscience Subtype


We will use three films as models: On the Waterfront (1954), Casablanca (1942), and Michael Clayton (2007).



Please keep in mind as you read on that story types and subtypes provide only generalized patterns of plot and character. They are not hard formulas that must be followed in exacting detail. In all three of our study films, there exists one or two elements that skew slightly to the left or right of the established pattern. These deviations do not invalidate the points made here, but merely show their flexibility. As I have said over and over, the rules of structure must adapt to the needs of the individual story, not the other way around.


The MAJOR PLAYERS


The Protagonist
The Protagonist of a Crisis of Conscience begins the story living in a world of self-imposed neutrality. He (or she) may have been optimistic in the past, but an event outside of his control has shattered his dreams and stained his outlook on the world. Though the protagonist may dislike the place fate has put him, the protagonist resigns himself to the notion that it is best to simply carry out the role he has been given. The character no longer has great ambitions. He just wants to survive.

Rick Blaine of Casablanca (Humphrey Bogart) was once an idealist fighting against the fascist cause. That is, until his heart was broken, causing him to become coarse and withdrawn, unwilling to care for anyone but himself. Terry Malloy of On the Waterfront (Marlon Brando) was once a promising prizefighter. That is, until mob creep Johnny Friendly told him to take a dive in his biggest fight. His dream shattered, Terry can see no other role in life than one of Friendly’s two-bit flunkies. The eponymous Michael Clayton (George Clooney) is the self-titled “janitor” of a powerful law firm. Though the job has given him status and money, he has grown sick of bending the law for morally ambiguous clients. At one time he planned to escape this life by opening his own restaurant, only to have his dream fall apart thanks to his drug-addicted brother, leaving him with a six-figure debt.

If one follows the Nine Character Alignments, Rick, Terry, and Michael all begin as True Neutral in their alignment, and then later transition into Neutral Good. However, a Crisis of Conscience protagonist can also work just as well as a Lawful Neutral who transitions into Lawful Good, or even a Chaotic Neutral who becomes Chaotic Good.

The Force of Darkness

The Force of Darkness character is the most pervasive influence in the protagonist’s life. Though the Protagonist may recognize that the Force of Darkness’s actions are evil or unjust, when the Force of Darkness asks the Protagonist to jump, the Protagonist asks how high. This is because the Protagonist feels he or she is subservient to the Force of Darkness, either due to a sense of familial loyalty (Johnny Friendly is an uncle-figure whom Terry has known since a boy), a sense of duty (the uNorth company – embodied by the corporate sociopath Karen Crowder (Tilda Swinton) – has paid Michael’s firm millions to do their dirty work), or a sense of obedience to the law (Rick Blaine’s world is ruled by a Nazi puppet regime – represented by Major Strasser – which Rick feels he must cooperate with for his own survival). Unlike a more traditional protagonist-antagonist relationship, in a Crisis of Conscience, the Protagonist and Force of Darkness begin the story on the same side. The Force is even on friendly terms with the Protagonist and trusts the Protagonist to do whatever it commands.

The Outside Relationship Character
As the name suggests, the Outside Relationship is a character (or characters) who exists either on the fringes of the Protagonist’s relationship with the Force of Darkness, or completely outside of it. In contrast to the Force of Darkness, the Outside Relationship represents morality, goodness, innocence, or justice. This character functions as a magnet to draw the protagonist away from the darkness and onto a righteous path by appealing the protagonist’s sense of decency. Usually this occurs by asking the protagonist for help; help that runs in complete opposition to the Force of Darkness.

In Casablanca, this character is Ilsa Lund (Ingrid Bergman), who begs Rick to defy Major Strasser so she and her fugitive husband may escape. In Waterfront, this is Edie (Eva Marie Saint), the love interest who compels Terry to atone for his role in the death of her brother. This relationship need not be romantic, however. In Michael Clayton this character is Arthur Edens (Tom Wilkinson), the lawyer gone rogue who asks Michael to help him destroy uNorth for the sake of everything good in the world. Father Barry (Karl Malden) exists as a secondary Outside Relationship in Waterfront. Here is one of those little deviations. While a single outside relationship character will usually do the job, Waterfront gives Terry’s conscience a double shot with two characters who compel him with two different angles on the same argument.

The Neutral Facilitator
The fourth and final essential Crisis of Conscience character behaves as what the “Hero’s Journey” archetype would call a shadow character. The Neutral Facilitator usually acts as an intermediary or messenger between the Protagonist and the Force of Darkness. Neither clearly good nor evil, it is often difficult to tell exactly where the Neutral Facilitator’s loyalty lies. Casablanca’s Captain Renault (Claude Rains) is a classic example. Renault is both Rick’s friend and foe. He kowtows to Strasser at one moment, and openly undermines him the next. Renualt “blows with the wind,” and does not reveal his true sentiments until the story’s very end. Michael’s boss Marty Bach (Sydney Pollack) fills this role in Clayton. Terry’s brother Charley (Rod Steiger) does so in Waterfront.

The function of the Neutral Facilitator is twofold. First, the character acts as a neutral party whom the protagonist can use as a sounding board as he struggles with his moral tug-of-war. Second and more importantly, the Neutral Facilitator brings the protagonist tasks and challenges designed to lead the protagonist deeper into the story situation. Marty orders Michael Clayton to track down and control Arthur. Charley tells Terry to spy on the Father Barry’s meeting, which leads Terry to become further involved with Edie. Renault is a central catalyst in Rick’s ordeal with the stolen letters of transit. Why is this necessary? When a protagonist starts a film as aloof and closed-off as those found in Crisis of Conscience stories, he or she does not feel very motivated to take any kind of action on his or her own. The protagonist would rather ignore the situation than get involved. Therefore, it is necessary for someone or something to push the protagonist into the situation until the time comes when the protagonist’s conscience comes takes hold and the protagonist feels the urge to act on his or her own.


The COURSE of the PLOT


Act 1
The story begins with the Protagonist given a small task, either by the Neutral Facilitator, the Force of Darkness, or both in cooperation. Terry is asked to take part in the events which lead to the killing of Edie’s brother. Renault asks Rick not to interfere with the arrest of Ugarte. Michael Clayton is sent upstate to clean up a messy hit-and-run. In carrying out this task, the Protagonist demonstrates that he is aligned with the Force of Darkness and is willing to participate in the Force’s morally ambiguous activities.

His loyalty established, the protagonist is then presented with a larger, more important mission. Terry is asked to spy on Father Barry’s meeting. Rick is asked to cooperate with Strasser’s efforts to against fugitive Victor Lazlo. Michael is sent to salvage a meltdown that has emerged in their case with uNorth. This mission puts the protagonist into direct contact with the Outside Relationship character. Terry helps Edie escape the violence that follows the meeting. Rick discovers that Lazlo is traveling with Isla. Michael must babysit Arthur Edens after Arthur’s psychotic breakdown.

Though the protagonist would prefer to complete this mission without becoming emotionally involved, something compels the protagonist, willingly or unwillingly, to extend his involvement with the Outside Relationship. Terry feels attracted to Edie and convinces her to see him again. Rick cannot bring himself to ignore Ilsa’s presence in Casablanca. Arthur escapes Michael’s watch. This event pushes the protagonist past a Point of No Return, involving him fully in the story situation. This becomes the End of 1st Act Turning Point.

Act 2A
As the interactions between the Protagonist and Outside Relationship character advance, the Outside Relationship begins to openly challenge the Protagonist’s ethics and behavior. He or she questions the reasons for the Protagonist’s allegiance to the Force of Darkness and then asks the Protagonist for help. However, the Outside Relationship’s request would mean open defiance of the Force of Darkness. Edie asks Terry to come clean about her brother’s murder. Isla begs Rick to help her and Lazlo escape. Arthur asks Michael to help him bring down uNorth.

Though the Protagonist refuses this request, the Outside Relationship succeeds at planting a dilemma in the Protagonist’s mind. The Protagonist is now finds himself at the center of two diametrically opposed lines of conflict: a conflict between the Protagonist and Outside Relationship over what the Outside Relationship wants him to do, versus a conflict between Protagonist and Force of Darkness over what it wants him to do. The “crisis of conscience” has fully formed.

As Act 2A advances, events cause this dilemma to grows more and more difficult for the Protagonist to handle. Before long, the Force of Darkness takes notice. The Force of Darkness begins to wonder whether the Protagonist remains truly loyal to its side, often giving the Protagonist warnings or threats, either directly or through the Neutral Facilitator.

The scales of this dilemma begin to tip at the Mid-2nd Act Turning Point. The Force of Darkness commits an action so morally reprehensible that the Protagonist feels he can no longer continue looking the other way. Johnny Friendly kills a second innocent dockworker. Major Strasser cracks down on Rick and makes a veiled promise kill Lazlo. Karen Crowder has Arthur murdered with a faked suicide. All it takes now is a little nudge from the Outside Relationship before the Protagonist decides he must turn on the Force of Darkness. At the Midpoint, the Protagonist takes the leap from reactive to proactive, from a slave to duty to a person of ethics, from flunkie to hero.

Act 2B
The protagonist begins Act 2B finally ready to take his first decisive actions against the Force of Darkness. Terry finally talks to the Waterfront Commission. Michael investigates the circumstances of Arthur’s death. Rick launches a plan to bluff his way past Strasser and Renault in order to get Ilsa and Lazlo to safety.

The Force of Darkness realizes what is happening and does not like it. It offers the Protagonist an ultimatum: either back off and get in line or be destroyed. Once again, the Neutral Facilitator character is often the messenger. This occurs in Waterfront in the classic scene between Terry and Charley in the back of the cab. This is the scene in Clayton when Marty tells Michael to forget about the entire situation and let uNorth resolve the situation.

The Protagonist refuses this ultimatum, and thus signs his own death warrant. The Force of Darkness sees no other option than to destroy the Protagonist. Karen Crowder has her goons put a bomb in Michael’s car. Johnny Friendly kills Terry’s brother and then tries to run Terry down. Though the Protagonist survives, he is overcome by a second significant change to his character. This is no longer just an ethical situation. It is a personal one. The Protagonist is convinced that the only remaining solution is to bring the Force of Darkness to its knees, and as Terry puts it, “take it out on their skulls.”

(It should be noted that Casablanca skips the last two plot points. This is because, surprisingly, Casablanca’s Act 2B is only one story sequence long. In fact, the film’s entire structural second half lasts only twenty minutes! Casablanca is an example of a film that succeeds despite having imperfect structure. I plan to write an article on this in the coming months.)

Act 3
In Act 3, the Protagonist launches a final plan to destroy the Force of Darkness and achieve justice for the Outside Relationship. Terry gets his revenge on Johnny Friendly, first politically by testifying against him in court, and then personally through a face-to-face confrontation. Rick ensures that Lazlo and Ilsa escape Casablanca by turning the tables on Renault and shooting Major Strasser. Michael scams a confession out of Karen Crowder that brings uNorth to its doom.

It is important to notice that in these final moments the Protagonist completes his full and total transformation from absolutely selfish to absolutely self-less. In order to do what it right, the Protagonist willingly sacrifices everything he has valued in the past. Terry gives up all of his privileges and becomes a pariah. Rick abandons his life of wealth and influence to become a wanted criminal of the Third Reich. Michael turns on his business, meaning he will likely lose his job and everything that comes with it. In order to take on the mantle of a hero, the Protagonist must wipe himself clean and start over from scratch. This makes the end bittersweet. However, all is not lost. By giving up his shallow, material comforts, the Protagonist gains something more valuable: the love and respect of those who still have decency in their hearts; whether it be the dockworkers, Renault, Michael’s policeman brother, or anyone else who still believes in goodness and justice.

Okay, you may say, there indeed seems to be a pattern here. But these three films all exist in a similar vein. They are all straight drama combined with elements of romance or thriller. But what about something in another genre? What about something completely different?


Who Framed Roger Rabbit?

 


Okay, here is something completely different. On the surface, Disney’s 1988 family comedy/detective noir mash-up seems to have little in common with Waterfront, Casablanca, or Clayton (except perhaps the prevalence of suits and fedoras). However, Who Framed Roger Rabbit? is also a Crisis of Conscience that follows the same pattern.

Rabbit’s Protagonist is Eddie Valiant (Bob Hoskins), a once happy-go-lucky private eye grown bitter and angry after his brother was murdered by a “toon.” Eddie now sees the world as dirty, ugly, unjust place. He has become self-centered, withdrawn, and most importantly, bigoted against toons.

This seems to make Eddie the perfect pawn for the story’s Force of Darkness, Judge Doom (Christopher Lloyd). Doom is a demented sociopath who wishes to use the law to crush Toontown under an iron claw. Though Eddie recognizes that Doom is a twisted character, Doom represents the law, much like Major Strasser in Casablanca. For a man in Eddie’s position, it is wisest for him to keep his mouth shut and play along.

Eddie’s story begins when he is hired for a minor task by cartoon studio head R.K. Maroon. Working as Doom’s proxy, Maroon asks Eddie to take incriminating photos of millionaire Marvin Acme with the wife of his star actor Roger Rabbit. Eddie does the task, proving his willingness to take part in morally ambiguous behavior. Unfortunately, this photos result in the murder of Marvin Acme, and Roger Rabbit is accused of the crime. Playing off Eddie’s bigotry for toons, Judge Doom requests a bigger task – to assist him in Roger’s capture and punishment.

Only Roger is innocent. He becomes the Outside Relationship character when he approaches Eddie and begs for his help. As typical in this subtype, Eddie wants nothing to do with Roger. However, Eddie is forced to extend the relationship with Roger when the two end up handcuffed together and Eddie must hide Roger from Doom’s flunkies.

Now Eddie faces a dilemma. Put his neck on the line for Roger or play it safe and let the chips fall where they may? Doom senses Eddie’s wavering commitment to the law and tries to intimidate him through various means. Only Doom takes things too far when he tries to execute Roger without trial at the story’s Midpoint. Eddie decides to openly defy the Force of Darkness by saving Roger. With this action, Eddie finally chooses to take willful action to put things right. Eddie begins his own investigation of Acme’s murder so Roger may be saved and justice done.

This leads Doom to conclude he must destroy Eddie. Eddie receives his first warning when Doom shoots at him in an alley. Eddie doesn’t quit, leading Doom to kidnap Eddie at the End of 2nd Act Turning Point, intent on killing him.

Though Who Framed Roger Rabbit has all the earmarks of a Crisis of Conscience subtype, it is not a perfect example of the subtype as are On the Waterfront or Michael Clayton. This is mostly the result of Roger Rabbit’s attempts to fulfill the needs of a family comedy, while at the same time follow the formula of a detective noir, while still using the plot pattern of a Crisis of Conscience. With all these diverse ingredients, some will inevitably be incompatible. First off, Roger Rabbit executes the functions of the Neutral Facilitator in a very clumsy manner. As the film begins, the Neutral Facilitator seems to be R.K. Maroon. However, Maroon almost disappears after the first act. The Neutral Facilitator’s shadow character qualities are denied to Maroon, and instead given to Jessica Rabbit. Jessica does partially fulfill the role of Neutral Facilitator for the remainder of the film, but she is also forced to pull double-duty as a noir femme fatale – two roles that are not necessarily complimentary. Because of this role confusion, Jessica Rabbit’s character is the least developed of the main cast and her scenes tend to inhibit the story rather than push it forward.

The second major flaw comes in the film’s third act. Even as a kid, I felt that the last twenty minutes of Roger Rabbit never lived up to the rest of the film. Now I know why. Rather than stick with the Crisis of Conscience story pattern, Roger Rabbit’s creators chose to end the film with a rather uninspired and unoriginal heroic rescue sequence. I guess the creators felt a family adventure demanded a big action finish leading up to a 100% feel-good resolution, yet it seems the film does not end as well as it should have. As I have observed before on story types, the films that have the most success with their audiences are time and again those that stick the closed to the principles of their story types. Diverge too much from type, or include elements that do not belong, and the end product will be weakened.

Coming Up: Part II, Crisis of Character